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Posted on 04-02-08 9:41 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Time machine...

It still feels like it was yesterday,
something I said which I would never say.
Your trust is tumbled, the feelings are sore;
days were sunny, the moments were happier before.

Ended up hurting someone whom I really care,
I am stranded alone in the middle of nowhere.
You got bruised because of those unconscious word,
and now it feels like I hit myself with a sword.

That was just a crash and now you seem so far.
Here in my mind, the feelings are still at war.
Your loss has left in my heart a deep scar.
I feel like in a cold cloudy night, a lone star.

I now regret for those things I did and say.
But you are gone and I am left to pray.
Now I can't even put my entreaty in a rhyme.
And, I wish I could turn back the time!

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Posted on 04-02-08 9:45 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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ट्याम मशिन, गुड वान नेउचे!
 
Posted on 04-02-08 9:49 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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nice work  thanks for sharing

 
Posted on 04-02-08 9:54 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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kaslai hurt garyau tesari NKC bro ke ho dherai nai tada gayin jasto cha ni bro

poem chai jhakaash cha hai bro ko


 
Posted on 04-03-08 1:08 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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I can relate to it...I too wish I could turn back the time...and change things around. But then again I know it's not gonna happen..at least not any time soon...
Just waiting for someone to invent a time machine...


 
Posted on 04-03-08 11:53 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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NKC bro, that's a nice piece. But I hope the things you have written there, didn't happen to you.
 
Posted on 04-03-08 1:55 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Nepche, it would definitely be great if we could turn back the time.  Great poem though.


 
Posted on 04-03-08 2:20 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Chitre bro, thank you very much for the inspiring note.

Trishul Baba, I am glad that you find those verses "nice". Thank you very much for the nice comment. 

Kalejo bro, hahaha. Poem lai tesari literally linu bhayena ni. Ahile samma ta kasai lai hurt gareko chaina, garnu pani na paros. Bro lai poem jhakas lageko sunera ma danga pare.

OYIC, Yeah, it would have been really nice if someone had invented the time machine so that we could back and change the things. Thanks for your nice words. I appreciate it.

Yakku bro, I am happy that you also found the piece a nice one. Those stanzas are just imaginary; I was just simulating what if we had a time manchine, what we could have done..

Dipu, thank you very much for those encouraging remarks. Yes, life would have been different, had there been a thing called "time machine". I appreciate your comments.  

 


 


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